Carly sat hunched on the cold tiled floor while silent sobs shuddered through her chest.
Wow... language be dawned, that was rough. Damn, I have nothing... and that says everything.
This is definitely one of the harder ones to read. Thank you for reading it! Hope it didn’t put a damper on your holiday lol
It's fine, it's just fiction (I hope). Take a breath and move on to the next story. Better than football. Hats off to you for a really powerful piece.
Yes yes, just fiction, in my case anyways.
Extremely sad and disturbing! But I think you nailed what you were going for. I want the best for Carly!
Thank you so much! ☺️
Beautiful structure. Counting the years (I'm thinking of the Sunflower story) was/is a bit of a leitmotif for you? The opening gave me enough detail for the ending to make sense without giving away the story's horrific secret.
Old story or new?
Old that I spent some time re-editing this go around
Thank you very much!
Wow... language be dawned, that was rough. Damn, I have nothing... and that says everything.
This is definitely one of the harder ones to read. Thank you for reading it! Hope it didn’t put a damper on your holiday lol
It's fine, it's just fiction (I hope). Take a breath and move on to the next story. Better than football. Hats off to you for a really powerful piece.
Yes yes, just fiction, in my case anyways.
Extremely sad and disturbing! But I think you nailed what you were going for. I want the best for Carly!
Thank you so much! ☺️
Beautiful structure. Counting the years (I'm thinking of the Sunflower story) was/is a bit of a leitmotif for you? The opening gave me enough detail for the ending to make sense without giving away the story's horrific secret.
Old story or new?
Old that I spent some time re-editing this go around
Thank you very much!